love fever



My mind was racing

 my face, palms were sweating

 my heart in peace slowly pumping

 bumping my insides

 I felt I was going to explode.

 My cheeks blushed red rose

 she sat patiently

 as the tension grows

 i blank out from utter confusion

 all I could do was smile.

 As I fell breathlessly to the ground

 Autumn leaves crunched trying to make a sound

 but love was in the air

 looking up at her, I saw clearly

 her complextion was fair.

 She came closer smelled like the beach

 all I could do was stare as I heard her heart

 beating through her chest.

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Submitted by Akioyamoto on March 29, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme A A A X X B C B X X D D E C E X X X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 533
Words 103
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

akio yamoto

I started writing when I was 17 and am currently 19 I'm writing for everyone to enjoy and to express my feelings hope yall like em. more…

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