Life-Work "Balance"



Work's dragging routine - mechanical
Keyboard stroke tap-tap-tap...
Maniacal, request: do more with less!
Promote synergies, with effective finesse
Never mind where to get the energies!
Super-food maxed-out enhancement pills
Kills! Plus some power bars for the keeping
Full-time-equivalent units - sinking!
Paid for 'x?' hours a day, performing till 12!
Let's welcome!
Universe, Inc., in which we chose to dwell
Over-people climbing, a huge stairwell
Shooting for stars and top-jobs done well!

...and then...
back to the shelter...
half-hour with kids...
"Honey, I'm home! Tired" (always)
Kiss-kiss!
Weekend's sleep and porches to sweep...
Life's bitter, but not without its sweets!
For so many it's that or land on the street...

And then - it's 5 AM!
Back to land, where slopes are steep!
Where few sheep seen among wolves
Signal papers signed by high-end schools
Genius fools, and blank-personalities
Encouraging progress, adapt to realities
Dollar-shaped monuments standing erect
Filtered through prism of polit-correct
Truth reminds some obscure euphemism,
Chaotic order, greed-driven cataclysm!
No matter the cost, job-show must go on!
'This tournament's prize is VERY hard-won!
Go with the flow or be gone!

...and then...back to the shelter...

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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XXAABXCCXDEEE XFXXXGXX XGXXBBHHDDXXX F
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,215
Words 191
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 13, 8, 13, 1

Didar Baizhanov

Somewhere between my birth in the land-locked nation of Kazakhstan and becoming U.S. Merchant Marine officer - poetry became something of a satellite in my travels through life ;) ____________________ My most sincere Thank You! for the feedback! ____________________ Here are some poems that I liked (here on Lulu), please give appropriate authors your comments if you get a chance:- October Hearts by PoetryofJune - High(Coup) by JayS (haiku) - Tranquility by Beccanine - Nemesis by Timothy Francis Savage - My Bright Place by Zenocyde - I Fought in a War by Justin R Esplin (haiku) - Love Blooms by Dee Edgett - A Haiku: Violin Music by Clara B. Ray - Cigarettes by faustus - Implode by Elise Hadden - Haiku: Violet Roses by PoetryofJune - The Friend I Didn't Want - Ryan Wong :) - Plus Infinity by Neli Fatu de Valahia - Never Good; Never Bad by Graham Geiger - Two Snowflakes by Kiran - With a grey sky by Spirals - Pine Needles by Matthew Lerette - Bound Again by Danny Warren Patterson - Lie-F by RomanoJohnson - A Child's Memory of a War by Change - A Cold November Day by Bonchance - El espejo roto (The Broken Mirror) by Taqua-------------------------------- more…

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