Let loose and have some fun!



Another friday night..
I'm wondering what to do?...

I worked all week,
too tire to do a thing...

Let's see...

I'll jump in the shower..

I'll put on that pretty dress
that's has been hanging up
in my closet for months...

Those cute high heels
just laying there
I'll put them on...

For once I'll blow dry my
hair...

Put on my favorite
red lipstick on my lips...

I'll spray some of that expensive
perfume, I haven't worn for awhile....

For once, I'll have some fun....

Let's see, where's my cell phone?

I'll call that cute guy, I went out with,
on my sister's birthday party..

Let's see, what he's
 up to, tonight!..

ring, ring,

Hello, he says...

Hello there, I reply...
what to hang out tonight?

Sure, he says...

Pick me up at eight, I said...
and don't be late....

Sure, I will not be late,
this time...

Tonight, I'll let my hair down...

Let loose and have
some fun!...

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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX XX X XXX XBX CB XX XX D X XX XA E CA E XF FX X XD
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 833
Words 161
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 3, 3, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2

Zoraida Rivera

Where can I start. I love to write..I received (A-) on my Journal Writing Class,.. when I went to study for my G.E.D...My poetry really started when I first wrote (Why Bother)...I wrote it for a guy that I use to date..My favorite flower is a Blue Rose..I use to roller blade in Central Park in Manhattan in New York City....I use to love swimming, I was a very good Diver..I love pretty things..I have flowers all around my bedroom..I wear ribbons on my hair..Now that I am older, I spend my time making jewelry, for fun...I write my poems.. more…

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