It looked like love



what began with a kiss
ends with a wave of the hand,
the shattering of a heart,
the burning of love
on a pyre of letters and cards
exchanged over happy years.

what exactly went wrong?
neither one cares to ask
how did the ending come?
who was to blame?
when did one become two?
they go their separate ways.

it was never love, she says,
or it would not have died.
it looked like love, he says,
when I held it up to the light.
but in the darkness where she cried
he dreamed love an undying magic
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

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Salvatore Buttaci

A retired teacher and compulsive writer, I ply the writing craft daily, composing poems, stories, articles, blogs, and letters.My book, A Family of Sicilians...is available right here at http://stores.lulu.com/ButtaciPublishing2008Also there is a chapbook for English teachers who need help teaching poetry. It's called Painless Poetry.and another book of mine, a collection of 164 short-short stories, Flashing My Shorts, is availableFROM AMAZON.COM at   http://tinyurl.com/26u8huk OR KINDLE EDITION  at  http://tinyurl.com/2f369weI live in West Virginia with the love of my life, my wife Sharon. more…

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