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Incomplete

qaz1692

Motionless, i lay
in a fast-pace world.
Undisrupted and undisturbed.

Closed, from the inside out.
Darkness,
where there should be light.
Paralyzed,
these limbs betray me.
Soft whispers,
come and sway me.

Monstrous roar
awaken my soul,
decieve me
into thinking i'm whole.
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XXX XXXXAXA XBAB
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 257
Words 43
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 7, 4
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