In my room



In my room I sit alone,

Thinking about you all day long,

How the days were fun,

Always made my day better,

Always told me to smarted up,

I never listened but I wish I did,

You won't be in heaven,

If I didn't give you stressed,

Now I'm sad and depressed,

Things ain't the same no more,

Barely even get some sleep,

I feel like I'm drowning in the deep,

Happy days are long gone,

I'm too tired to go on,

You always said,

" Life goes on but never ends"

I askes God why,

You had to go,

When I heared your voice,

Telling me you wanted to go back home...
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Submitted on July 03, 2016

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Scheme X X A X X X A B B X C C X X X X X X X X
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 528
Words 113
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

Ishmael Balfour

I started to read poems when I was 10 years old and was liking writing poems each day. Years later my mom was happy and glad I was writing small books and poems but sadly I lost her when I was only 15 years old and Remember's Day was the day she passed. Since then it has been two years and I wanted to make a poem group on facebook so I did. Couple months went by and my school started a poem group too so I joined. Friends and teachers told me I made amazing poems couple of my friend said they cried and so did some of teachers too. I kept on writing poems and get 14 followers in my poem group but I wanted more. Now I'm here posting my poems to the world all because of friends, family and teachers for being there for me. Thank you all :) more…

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