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In My opinion,

Love is a day-to-day thing.
Shared in the head- whether mentally ill or telepathic is not a love.
I think Love is mutual - give&take
Everything else is 'my own illness to overcome'
And I hope all these people do the same.
It doesn't matter if we are telepathic or not - it's a matter of where you choose to participate
In my case, I don't want to participate 'that' deep - to know about ufology
I think 'sentient beings' are generally unenlightened
In this world, difficult to meet a teacher
I think there could be 'sharing of' wishful thinking
And such could be shared - but if the man doesn't take the step to realize the dream as reality
It's just a delusion
And if he says stuff like 'i thought you were an angel, or heaven-sent, and you had to come, such as to my dreams to serve me,' I don't believe that
I believe No devil, No buddha, no god or No mary or no goddess of mercy serve for free
you ask courteously to teachers, 'dear teacher, give me teaching, then given teaching.'
'nothing in this world is earned for free'
And so, 'I don't ever go to people's dreams,' - I was given dreams though
I did think something vulgar at times - who doesn't at what age?
This is your daily burden - as it was for me
to overcome, and In my opinion
There has NEVER been a love in my life
It has always been all imaginary
I 'wanted' 'such a fulfilling' feeling of Love - it was Never there
I wanted to hear such songs at early age, and I got what I wanted
later, I never wanted to hear any songs, - they were still making
There was 'me' poking at universes,
The universe itself - as experienced as a human on earth
Never gave anything for free,
It was hard-earned i had to ask teachers for guidance
It was never ever 'that' kind of unconditional serving
I think 'we earn' what we 'actually ask for'
I realized at early age on enough
I don't like this kind of cheesy ghost stories - this is too low-level for me
I am spiritually far more aware of such conspiracy theories
If they wanna bring cold world, then they should BUT
I am personally gonna cut away from this kind of desires and this ecosystem entirely
My mind is pure and it knows what it wants,
the world doesn't wanna correspond, it's tainted and planned and scripted etc
then I will just let it be.

I may toy with the ideas of Louis or Jean or whoever,
But ultimately, I am doing it to learn - how obsession destroys us
My mind was sober from the moment I entered this world - it never blinded
And I will pursue truth - if fallen angels don't want, then have this hell for yourself
I, at least, had guts to admit what I felt.
This is not what i want - the whole thing I see nowadays in the world.
It will be cold for the next 20 years. - I guarantee that.
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Submitted on December 16, 2015

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Closest metre Iambic octameter
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Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 39, 7

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