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I'm still waiting for your call

Mohamed Fazloon

It's been more than a day you didn't call,
I don't know if I did something wrong,
Here I am standing all alone,
“Another day without you” I hate this song,
Is this the way love goes or I have to wait for so long,
Either way I'm the looser waiting in the desert for the rain to fall,

You are busy in everything you do but I don't know how?
Life isn't the paradise I used know,
Simply pick-up the phone and say how are you my love,
That's enough for this aching heart,
Send me a SMS about how you feel and make me smart,
If you have forgotten that my head is full of puzzles to solve.
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Submitted on July 24, 2017

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Scheme ABXBBA XXXCCX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 575
Words 120
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 6, 6
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Mohamed Fazloon

My Personal profile:I belong to a gem merchant family. I began writing poetry since I was in my fifth grade. I completed my London Ordinary level and London Advanced level in 1998. I also completed my diploma in business management and I finally attained my Bachelors degree B.com in marketing - U.S.A - 2009.My Achievements:1) Won the Editors choice award from International Library of Poetry UK -1997.2) Member of the International society of poets.3) Won many awards at school for best poetry writing - 1995-1998.4) Many poems been published in local newspapers and magazines - 1995-2000. 5) Most valuable poet - poetry.com - 20126) Poet Laureate - Poetry.com - 20127) Legendary Poet - Poetry.com -2012 more…

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