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I'm so sorry Lord

Taleshia G MCcray

Please help me Lord
I'm break down i'm call
for help.The evil one want
me die but i will not let evil take
me away and put in hell
i don't think so.I can't breathe
at time i want John so bad
i want him to be my man.
I'm not happy I'm so sad
I want him to be my man.
Why is'nt he my man?
Why did i have to be born?
Please teachings me lord how
to walk better good person
to myself.I think to myself
if i die will i be miss?
Are you with her i wish i can
be her for one day that will be so
cool maybe.
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Characters 481
Words 118
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
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