I'm Confused



The sun raises and set down so the moon would
Appear with his glowing diamonds stars all over.

Once my two eyes saw the beauty you got I got
Really confused of how can I describe you now.

Especially, I gave all of those coquetry words away too
In a gold neckless on woman's neck, whom they

Lost all of those of compliment after you arrived
With your mini black skirt and your brown high heels.

Only the way you walked, made all the men alike
Hunters, and you are the most attractive gazelle.

Between me and them nothing is the same way
I see you more like a woman with two soft hands

Ready to open my virgin heart and fill it with your
Love that will create me with a warm hearted woman.

Don't ever try to walk near with women, they will
Follow your steps to see your emerald green eyes.

Them jealously would let them dissemble, as if they
Watching your regular bag into a Louis Vuitton bag.

I'm confused if you will be with me, together you will
Be my shining sorrow to cut them away from our way.

So I can tell you that my lips were always thirsty and
Impatient to kiss your mini strawberry lips before any
Men does ahead.

25/6/2014
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Submitted on August 20, 2014

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX XX XA XX XX AX XX BX AX BA XXX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,111
Words 219
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3

Ahmad Al_khatat

I started writing poems since I was ten years old, Most of my poems are free verse or proses.Which talked about sad dark and wild romance .Even some ones talking politics.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose_poetryhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_verse ahmad4all_2@hotmail.comMontreal - Canada Thank you more…

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