I would ask



I would ask 05/24/2010 04:58

You could have fooled me, but there is much more about life
Than you will ever know, because you lie and never be
involved
You're older now and wonder about life
Oh, I know, oh yes I know you never had a life
Oh, not even your mother can not look at you and say you're a artist
A bullish and a mechanic have more talent than you
You can call me a loser angry
Your voice can make me nervous
But if I could tell you something I would say
Oh baby, I still cherish
And I ask the heavens and ask you
Please live your life! Ask someone!
Save your life, I would ask everything
My dear, if you had one life to live
But you've lost your life for so long! So long ago...
And if you ever think of me
And know you're worth so much to humanity and for me just like Idi Amin worth
oh I ask, oh would really do if you had a life...

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Submitted on September 02, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X ABXAAXCBXXXCXXXXBXA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 826
Words 178
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 19

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