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i want more wine...

Zoraida Rivera

My oh My
I want more wine
I want to feel fine..

I'm sitting in a classy place
waiting for my date
is nearly eight pm
he's very very very late..

My oh My
I want more wine
is my forth or maybe fifth glass
I just lost count
I know I'm feeling fine..

My cell phone rings
he's on the phone
telling me he's heading home
unable to keep our date..

Before he hangs up the phone
I hear a female's voice
laughing out loud..

My oh My I want more wine...
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABb xcxc ABxxb xdxc dxx b
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 422
Words 93
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 5, 4, 3, 1
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Zoraida Rivera

Where can I start. I love to write..I received (A-) on my Journal Writing Class,.. when I went to study for my G.E.D...My poetry really started when I first wrote (Why Bother)...I wrote it for a guy that I use to date..My favorite flower is a Blue Rose..I use to roller blade in Central Park in Manhattan in New York City....I use to love swimming, I was a very good Diver..I love pretty things..I have flowers all around my bedroom..I wear ribbons on my hair..Now that I am older, I spend my time making jewelry, for fun...I write my poems.. more…

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