I have made you my captive



Wearing smiles though unwilling and forcible
 this time tears stuck between the eyes uncontrollable
 here I'm on the road again
 in search of my lost dreams.

 how long i waited
 i waited for You
 i can't comment
 for time wasn't in my thought

 o my imagination
 when I watch for You
 my mind is merged in You
 time's existence appears nowhere
 when You are near.....

 since You have gone
 i searched you everywhere
 and now i sit on a boulder
 and at last, found You
 in my inmost self......

 i have made You my captive
 in my heart and soul
 now want to see how You break free
 this fetter of my love made up of my prayers.....
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Submitted on August 22, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AAXX XBXX XBBCX XCXBX XXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 607
Words 118
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 5, 4

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