Hope Lost
May I walk with You for a while?
I am weary- tired of the fight
May we talk?
Of deeds and actions that no longer seem right
At an early age Your gifts manifest
My strength- intellect – curiosity propelled me forward
No dream seemed too large-too daunting
My future seemed unchallenged -assured
My ideas- my dreams I gave willingly
The celebration- the recognition seemed so real
I can still hear the congratulations
It echoes in me still
But time has passed
My years are apparent
A brown mantle now peppered with gray
Skin now wrinkled shows age transparent
Somehow those gifts You gave
Your gifts- so precious- no longer burn
Yet nothing You have given
Have You taken in return
What happened to the creativity?
To the optimism- to the sheer abilities
That had always been there
Replaced by a hollow cavity now filled with insecurities
He stopped and spoke - "my beloved- my champion
I sent you into the fray with what was required
You left my side with the spark
That would have become a blaze that inspired
I watched- I cried as you grew
Instead of the flame-your soul-growing in time
You allowed it to be consumed
That which was beautiful was cast before the swine
Now you stand before me- a shell
Nothing of what could have been
My heart- like yours feels violated
By a thief in the night perpetuating the greatest of sins"
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Submitted by bkurple on October 23, 2016
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | XAXA XBXX CXXX XDXD XEFE CGXG FBXB XXXX XXXX |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,322 |
Words | 240 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
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