Help Me I'm Fine



HELP ME I’M FINE

Hapless life like the wilting leaF
Empty, numb, oppressive ennuI
Lonely heart so deeply brokeN
Pernicious words asphyxiate mE

Mortified, abandoned, arrivedercI
 Eroding spirit deaths silent alarM

Haunting thoughts to harm myself
Euthanasia “relief” roped esophagI
 Last breath… fleet divine envisioN
Pristine grace, exuberant, exquisitE
Wait!! Wait!!
Memories of love laughter symmetrI
Expel the evil that steals thy dreaM
 Too late for me
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Submitted on October 26, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X XABA XX XXBXXXXA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 450
Words 67
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 2, 8

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