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Hello, Blade

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Oh my God.
I... I just don't know what to do.
Hello, blade.
On paper my life looks wonderful.
But who wrote it down?
Outside my mind everything is perfect.
But what about up in here?
Outside my soul everything seems calm.
But what about my true heart?
Hello, blade.
Should I use it's sharp edge?
I look at it.
B-but what should I do??
Tears fill my eyes while I think.
Hello, blade.
I grip it tightly,
Still not sure if I want to take this step.
I cry a little.
Hello, blade.
ATL wraps their voices and music
Around these ears
And my sad mind.
I still cry but,
For now at least,
Goodbye, blade.
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

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I'm 13. I love Journey to the Past, Hey There Delilah, and Once Upon a December. I love the movies Scott Pilgrim VS The World and Anastasia."Life is one grand, sweet song, so start the music." ~Ronald Reagan"Life's greatest tragedy is not that it will someday end, but that most only live to follow directions and sometimes we end up totally lost." ~ Alex Gaskarth"Our character is what we do when we think no one is looking." ~ H. Jackson Brown, Jr."Our street corners keep secrets, and our road signs only suggest, never deciding for us, never knowing if the destination to which they lead is where we truly belong." ~ Alex GaskarthAwesome youtube video(s) of the week: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dCmRIFVH4O4&feature=player_embedded http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FV-HPOHu8mY more…

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