Hell...



Sinking to the endless decay

I'm not sure if I'll go on

drowning in regrets where is the sun ray?

I thought I had your heart,

I thought you were mine

but you pushed you pushed me away

I said "fine".

But inside I'm hurting my heart longs

for you... God I'm trying to be strong

but hope is diminishing

like the last light of the sunset

my thoughts are sad and my feelings are hurt

I'm not sure what to do anymore

life is becoming a bore

I have no friends and my head is sore.
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Submitted by Akioyamoto on March 29, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A X A X B A B X X X X X C C C
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 459
Words 97
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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