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Hell's fires part 1

C Castro

Stuck in my own hell, surrounded by flames.
I try to get rid of them but no ground is gained,
I douse and I pour but the flames just get higher.
I can't breath I can't think I'm consumed by this fire.
I look down in my hands can't believe what I see...
I'm trying to put out these flames with straight gasoline...
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Submitted on October 17, 2015

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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 308
Words 63
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6
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C Castro

I'm def don't consider myself a poet I started writing after my sister passed away...Just to try and express myself with out having to throw my misery or sadness on anyone else.... At times my poems are dark but that's just how I felt at the moment more…

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