Hell



I have a secret if you won't tell
I just came back  visited hell
Happened as I  was crossing  the street
A drunken driver  sent me flying by my feet
He hit  me  square   than  he split
I felt a burning sensation real quick
Than I heard voices as they began to speak
I said what the hell .......
Puzzled, the devil asked  how can I  tell?
The devil responded  you are not looking well
Why don't you sit a spell
I' ll send you back  from where  you came from
Not much room for newbies  too crowdwed can't you tell
Have  a nice life up there
It is just new expansion a suborb of hell.
That driver that hit you I know him well
He will be promoted he did his job swell.
Keep this secret don't you tell
If God finds out  you'll be asked
Where is heaven and where is hell?

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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AABBCDEAAAAFAGAAAAHA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 746
Words 153
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

Palace Keeper

Hungarian Born. As a child lived through the revolution and fortunate to find freedom in the West.Educated in Montreal Canada . Sir Georges Williams University.Moved to Florida and became an American Citizen.Enjoy all kind of sports. Try to stay healthy and in good shape.I love women who are smart and can take care of themselves.Somewhat a loner . Don't like parties or crowds. Like big cities to visit but not to live in. I should of been a farmer for I like hard work and enjoy building with my hands. Love all sorts of animals for they are honest.They either like you or hate you. I guess that is the way I am with people.Hot or cold. Not luke warm. I never stay in company of people that bore me. I guess I am weird that way. I took up writing as my dad was dying with cancer.I find it as a good release. Not really happy about commenting about other peoples poems. I enjoy reading them and always wonder what made them start writing. I don't want to be judgmental or the reason for why they stopped. We all could use each others encouragement.Thank you for visiting with me. more…

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