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Heaven's Hell

Jymmy Creasy


Flawed but untouched by evils temptation
I know I'm standing in an abandon station
Realizing that heaven wasn't perfectly build for me
I ran for the exit but God wouldn't let this prisoner free
I prayed for days and cried until my eyes were dry
But God refused to understand why this angel didn't wish to fly
So he chained the angel inside this prison cell
Encaged in heaven but living in hell
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Submitted on May 15, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCCDD
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 386
Words 73
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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Jymmy Creasy

I'm a working class skin, who has no faith in the future of the world. It's only downhill from here. I pray every night for the end and wake up every morning happier than the day before. In the chaos of my life I have found peace in my own sadness. All I have are the clothes on my back and the shoes on my feet and I love it that way... I'm not a rich man and never will be not because it's out of reach but because I hate money and greedy people... Everything I have ever have or will have I will end up giving away. "And call a man a fool, If for wealth he doesn't strive? Well then, Mr, you're a better man than I," more…

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