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He's with me

R L

Take my hand my dear child
I beseech you.
Take my hand my dear child
Can't you see?
Take my hand my dear child
He is waiting.
Take my hand my dear child
Here's the way.

Everything's so bleak, everything is fading.
Everything's so dark, why can't I be?
Everything's so numb, why cant I feel now?
Everything's is done, so hear my plea.

Take my hand my dear child
they await you.
Take my hand my dear child
I 'm with thee.
Take my hand my dear child
God is waiting.
Take my hand my dear child
Rejoice with me.
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Submitted on January 23, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AbAcAdAx dcxc AbAcAdAc
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 487
Words 101
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 4, 8
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R L

A lot of my poetry is / was influence by my surroundings, hopefully I can continue writing like I used to, just looking for that spark! more…

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