Growing Old In Good Time



Like an extension of my own nervous system,
your fingers to my hand, that close in scope.
We're a breath n' heartbeat apart in wisdom,
temper of same trials and born of same hope.

Your the one I'm growing old with it's foretold,
our history spans the shared joys n' the pain.
We have withstood and partaken it all in bold,
n' hammered our shield in gild to ever remain.

All compatible traits, we refined, like ilk to kin,
the opposite inclines, we smoothed out to flat.
Traversed a path in fine time, the goal to win,
now goodness pervades our getting to all 'that'.

I hold your hand on our final journey to home,
we've done well, our children stout, to excell.
As age calls our shady reprise of life on loan,
I see only light on trail ahead n' love to prevail!

TBollinger
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Submitted on August 03, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF XGXG
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 756
Words 145
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Tracy Bollinger

Always liked to write and have written poems periodically over the years. I've never shared them withanyone except for immediate family. Decided to take the plunge and put some out 'there'. But bearwith me, I don't really know what I'm doing. This is therapy of sorts and I hope to let go of the need to rhyme. It's a mental condition. I recently found out my grandmother used to rhyme all herletters to anyone. Go figure. I hope you all enjoy my ranting! I do like what I've seen other's post. more…

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