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God'S smile

Satya Pattnaik

“Let not the door be closed
Says with all delight

 Hours of GOD smiling,

 He is in a different mood

 Keeps windows open

 Ruins have started now

 Paying attention to the moods of GOD

 Listening to the story of green untold

 Fishes are of golden and silver

 Have just broken the aquarium

 To embrace the master

 For counting new hours of aquatic happiness

 After years of cage and tears Hunger, death and fears
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Submitted on January 10, 2013

Modified on April 24, 2023

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Scheme XX X X X X X X A X A X X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 398
Words 73
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
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