Giant Blue Eyeball



Her consciousness ignited and with a jolt she accelerated,
She could see herself floating towards what looked like a giant blue eyeball;
The pure excitement made her feel new and alive for the very first time
As she spiralled, swayed, and seesawed through her endless fall.

The stunning void winked and welcomed the whipsawing wanderer
As she whirled, twirled, and swirled then swiveled along her ride;
This caused her to gyrate into a somersaulting pirouette
Then rotate and revolve into a looping coil as she spun inside.

The crystal blue was so vivid it persuaded her to continue
As there was no longer any doubt that she was in the vicinity;
When she saw the giant blue eyeball quiver like jello
She knew she had safely arrived at her destination of infinity.
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Submitted by g_d on July 28, 2016

Modified on April 12, 2023

39 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA XBXB XCXC
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 752
Words 132
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

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