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I have a daughter, Samantha is her name,
If she wrote a bad poem I would tell her the same,
Do not think you are great if you can sit and write,
I can sit and do this all night,
Your poem was weak I called it lame,
I never cursed or called you a name,
You asked for critique I gave you mine,
If I made you mad just get in line.
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Submitted on August 22, 2014

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I have been writing for about 20 years. Found I could rhyme a little and still say something. Was led to use this for the Glory of God and His Son my Saviour. I do write some personal poems but it seems that God gets in those too. It is appropriate though because He is my life. more…

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