From Up Above HP'S Challenge (second try)



I met him when I was nine.
We were childhood friends.
I was shy but he was so very kind.
We would play ball and he would let me win.
We grew together this fellow and I.
And when I was sixteen I married this guy.
We had two children a boy and a girl.
I was his universe and he was my world.
And then one cold December day,
death came and tried to take this love away.
It's been fifteen years now my true love.
and still my greatest love is loving me
from up above.

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Submitted on August 15, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEEFGHHIJI
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 457
Words 99
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13

Michelle Angel

I have been writing since the age of 9 or 10. I love to write. It is my passion and has helped me through some of the most difficult times of my life. I write for the joy of it. My faith and my family is the inspiration behind many of my poems. more…

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