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Forever?

BlackAngel Evo

He smiled
I smiled
Thought everything was going to be alright

Time passed
Our bond grew weaker
Distance grew
Moods become bleaker

Things started changing
You started changing
You shut me out
I felt alone

No explanations
You just sat silent
You left me as confused as ever

Was it me?
Have I changed?
I'm sorry
but I don't understand

I should've read the signs
Should have realized you weren't very happy
I take it as my mistake

Was it me?

Have I changed?
I'm sorry
I really really am

Time passed
We faded
Thought we'd last forever

Should've realised
Should've know
Forever is a really long time

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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme aax Bcxc ddxx xxc EFEx xex E FEx Bxc axx
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 563
Words 108
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 3, 4, 3, 1, 3, 3, 3
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