Fine Fluctuations



Fine fluctuations of beautiful moods,
around and around - up - down - up - spinning,
artistic colourful palette in mind,
dreams are forsaken as the world intrudes.

Wild hunger consumes this grip which eludes
whispered past frowns; broken snickers in shades,
alive - yawn-cracked knuckles' insane echo,
fine fluctuations of beautiful moods.

Flickers remembered; visionary feuds
hover softly within stuttered distance,
dawn drips champagne charm towards the day's glow,
dreams are forsaken as the world intrudes.

Fine fluctuations of beautiful moods,
awake, pillow's rush retreats back to sleep,
dreams are forsaken as the world intrudes.

A Villonnet is a hybrid of the Villanelle and the Sonnet.
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Submitted on August 14, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AxxA axbA axbA AxA x
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 679
Words 107
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 3, 1

Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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