excerpt 16



We felt great, monopolizing   the mouth of the main industrial  pipe, like a fool monopolizes virtues.   The chemical plant was dumping it's waist in a lukewarm, fluid format,  it was like a free jacuzzi in open air to us..

The rainbow colors were eye captivating,   and while sat below the pipe, we had the   upper hand, kept our tegument comfortable.   It was like a crossbreeding   phenomenon between   aurora borialis and rainbow.   Right on our back door,   less the hustle of traveling   from pole to pole to experience it.   We enjoyed bathing under the pipes,   pretty much all day, since our body   temperature remained constant,   at least for that time being...

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Submitted on July 10, 2014

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