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Enough!








There is no blazing sun



Wind is cool



And rays have turned soft



Take out you black glass



Keep it up and aloft



Sun is not raging fire



Then why you O my dear



Feeling jealous and are on severe ire



Let the season take turn



Then you will notice



How itching is this sun burn



Every time there is ice in my compound



And every time it melts to water



Every season changes



And winds change direction



But your awesome hateful heart beat



Never reflect a little affection



Towards me



And every season you leave me glum without glee



Can you once, just once say



I love you



Let it be just a fake



But your words will sweeten my mouth



Like delicious fruit jelly cake



Then off course you can put a final brake



After all how many season do i witness



My turn is over



Now i am going to sleep finally in harness.





There is no blazing sun



Wind is cool



And rays have turned soft



Take out you black glass



Keep it up and aloft



Sun is not raging fire



Then why you O my dear



Feeling jealous and are on severe ire



Let the season take turn



Then you will notice



How itching is this sun burn



Every time there is ice in my compound



And every time it melts to water



Every season changes



And winds change direction



But your awesome hateful heart beat



Never reflect a little affection



Towards me



And every season you leave me glum without glee



Can you once, just once say



I love you



Let it be just a fake



But your words will sweeten my mouth



Like delicious fruit jelly cake



Then off course you can put a final brake



After all how many season do i witness



My turn is over



Now i am going to sleep finally in harness.
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Submitted on January 26, 2016

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Scheme A B C D E F G H I J I K F L A M A N O P Q R Q Q J F J A B C D E F G H I J I K F L A M A N O P Q R Q Q J F J
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,518
Words 314
Stanzas 54
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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