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Eden garden

Jawahar Gupta

WONDER EYES
 ===========
 It pleases my body
 That you watch it with love.
 And your slow gaze on my face-
 Because you want me !
 When I see in your wonder eyes,
 Then I understand
 Why I want to be yours.

 And it pleases my
 Every inch of skin touched by you,
 But more,
 It pleases my soul that yearns for your soul.
 You see that I really am
 What you imagine I am ?
 I'm the life of spring,
 Pleasing your heart
 You are the running time
 I share this season with you.
 Let us please in this spring together.
 ~~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~~
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Submitted on August 21, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A BXXBAXX XCXXDDXXXCXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 518
Words 102
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 9, 12
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