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Don'T correct me with red ink

Jawahar Gupta

DON'T CORRECT ME WITH RED INK
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If he was Summer
I was Winter
If he was sunshine
I was night - a dark and stormy one.

My friend
Did you hear lightning storms can be very striking?

Don't worry
Keep calm and here take my umbrella
 Remember that - wherever you go,
I will be there

 I know
You are mist defying
Please don't correct me with red ink
You know Its cold outside
When you go outside
Its cold

~~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~~
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Submitted on February 24, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme A BBXX XC XDEX ECAFFX D
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 431
Words 84
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 2, 4, 6, 1
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