Detective noir story Rain (poems 1 & 2)
I arrived at the bar midst sheets of rain
Now the squall had passed, water sat in quilts
As I quaffed my second beer I sensed pain
Dropping the glass I fell as if from stilts
I woke in an Italian restaurant
Facing Fat John and his date, not as old
As the Scotch he was drinking “What you want?”
I snarled. “The old you” he said “He wouldn't fold”
“Quit whining” I said “Saved you a hundred”
Was I'd grind the goon's Snoz into the rug
Then to the poor sap a yard would be fed
Never worked for him, just returned his thug
I was only a beer drunk. While drinking
I still did an awful lot of thinking
Now I cogitated, seems like a frame
He wants to set me up to take a fall
While he runs off with an Orchid, some game
John was blowing smoke, when before, his drawl
Said he wanted the old me(weak sister
He's after) he thinks too many putdowns
Has made me a Palooka, a blister
On the goon's beezer I'll place, facedowns
Raw my nerves, I could be sitting pretty
Could pull a double-cross, find a sheba
And vanish like smoke, lost in the city
With the berries, I'll play the dim fella
I'm behind the eight-ball, long on the nut
He's heavy sugar, need to fill my gut
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Submitted on October 08, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABAB CDCD XEXE FF GHGH IXIB JKJK LL |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,175 |
Words | 231 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 2, 4, 4, 4, 2 |
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