Defiant ( Written for my sister Juana)



In this life I learned to be defiant

You say I'm micro but I say I'm a giant

You told me I wouldn't walk and I out ran you all

Uplifting my spirit never letting it fall

I rose from the ashes like a phoenix from the fire

I did what I wanted my every desire

Walked my own path even while staring at death

Smiled at the b*st*rd and took my last breath

With defiance in my heart and strength in my voice

I told him he wasn't needed because I left by choice

Defiant as ever I then turned around and looked at the footsteps I left in the ground

Traces of me left everywhere in every person I know and every memory shared.

BY Carmen Castro
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Submitted on October 17, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme A A B B C C D D E E X X X
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 620
Words 129
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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I'm def don't consider myself a poet I started writing after my sister passed away...Just to try and express myself with out having to throw my misery or sadness on anyone else.... At times my poems are dark but that's just how I felt at the moment more…

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