Completeness



With you I feel like I am complete,
My love is as strong as concrete.
For many years I have felt very lonesome,
But with you my heart feels at home.
Safe is how you make me feel,
For you have made a steal.
I give my heart away,
It is only for you everyday.
You're exceedingly charming,
I know there won't be any harming.
I love how your eyes shine,
When you're looking at mine.
 In your arms I feel so secure,
I know there's all we can endure.
Your smile lights up like the sun,
I'm so glad that I'm your Hun.
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Submitted on November 16, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AABCDDEEFFGGHHII
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 494
Words 104
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

Amber Gillie

Variety of poems I have written I'm a Poet, Hopeless Romantic, Believer, Dedicated, Lover, Mother, Klutzy, Believes in Fairytale endings, OptimisticI see beauty in everything that God has created & see "art" in all forms. more…

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