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Carolyn, why the sun sets with you...

Michael Anthony Keaulana

When I awake...
with morning's dew,..
My thoughts are alive, these thoughts of you.
As the sun sets, my eyes a new
Open widely a life with you be true
Troubled with a past, gloomy and blue
Can only be changed from the love of two
My thoughts of old and withered past
Now new life of hope outlast
So as the evening ends
Carrying nights white moon
Is when my thoughts are strongest
That seeing you will be soon
Questioning reasons of love be true
These are a few, of why the sun set with you...
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABBBBBBCCDEFEBB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 478
Words 97
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
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