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Candle lit at night!!!

The candle will lit
Till the dawn
It is just
Nights pawn
When sun rises
In the east
It is reduced to
Just a junky beast
But when the candle lights
It attracts moths around
They love soft glow bright
Love fully they throw
Their life to the light
Sun is life for the earth
But candle is darks
Lovely birth
It is lit in the dark
So that
In darkness
Life can still embark
Darkness has a cure
Dim candle opens the door
But the darkness in the day
Has any cure, can you say?
Darkness dwells in mind
No light can get it refined
The candle of love knowledge and sanity
Can bring some sort of minds purity
The dark minds hearts and soul
Are difficult heeling
They are desperate soul at brawl………….
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Submitted on August 21, 2013

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