Burning Up



I wish i could tell you whats on my mind

Not only will it hurt you

but its burning me inside

Like a lava it melts the strongest part of me

leaking through to the outside

and blackening the ground all around me

Every where i walk the lava follows

and leaves a trail that is not hollow

I am slowly turning into a liquid glop

knowing that it will not stop

I watch how my body just disappears

into a new form, right in front of you here

Why is this lava attacking my soul?

its because my secret is still untold.
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Submitted on January 22, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X X A B A B X X C C X X X X
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 494
Words 103
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

Ashley

I am 19 years old, and I have been through some losses that most teens won't have to go through untill they are much older.My Dad passed away in a truck accident in 2003 and three years later my Mom was taken from me by cancer. It has been really rough so far,me dealing with my depression and just learning how life is all on my own. But I am strong and I will pull through this period in my life. In the end it is all about what i learned and i know i will be seeing them again. more…

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