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Bumble Bee Attack (Poem No. 508)



Haiku form 5-7-6 posted 508

Bumble Bee attack,
Dozens of them on my back;
Humming all around.

Never mess their nest,
They will not put you at rest;
Might as well retreat!

You can run, as fast
As you can, but you can't hide,
Lost them in zigzag.

You would not believe,
when you are under attack
You'll pick up quick speed.


By Ms. Ging
02-26-13

Comment:
Buble Bee Attack:
This piece is inspired
of my past by gone days,
In the farm in which
I run into the Bumble bee's nest.
I was alone just me and
my Lord. I was attacked
backward, sideways and forward;
running like crazy, Jumping like flea.
Like a feet touch on the heat,
screaming, hitting, rolling
Praying out loud for help.
I killed few but there were more
than I could tackle or judo.
Then God came to my rescue.
My prayers been answered;
He saved my life.
God made the bumble bee,
flee away from me;
Suddenly, they were all turning back,
Leaving me in peace in verge of heart attack!
I was shaking like leaves,
Thanks to God The Almighty I Serve!
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