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Breaking Apart



The change I've seen in you
Isn't one for the better
UV seem to have changed
Or so it seems
I just want you back to normal

I miss the go getter you used to be
So loud and funny you were
U'v seem to have changed
Or so it seems
Can we go back to before?
Or is that too much to ask for?

I hate changes
Ones that break everything apart
Feel likes everything slowly drifting away
I don't like this change
One that isn't for the better

U'v seem to have changed
Or so it seems
I just want you back to normal
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

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Quick analysis:

Scheme xabCD xaBCee xxxxa BCD
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 482
Words 106
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 5, 3

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