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Rock n roll
And break dance
What a fun
Great romance
Whole night
We awake
Eat the chick
And sweet cake
Such is the dance
Called break!
The earth has
Every right to shake
As mentioned in the BOOK
And this shakes
Will cause
A devastating brake
And then
There will be real
Rock n roll
And real break
And we will
Not have time
To eat the cake
When arrive will doom
Spread will be gloom
Deeds we need
This voyage to proceed
If acts go awry
Feel will turn into a sorry
A day will come with brakes churning
And perhaps the last day break
Alas before that
We could awake?
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Submitted on April 07, 2014

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Scheme a bAcxcxbxbcbxxbxxxbxaAbaxbddeexxxbxb
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 579
Words 122
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 35

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