Be Sensitive To Others Feeling (Poem No. 518)

At last March 15, 2013,  forty Six years of living...
In my younger years I took care of my body very well.
I've been through some ups and down in life,
But you can't tell because you were not there
to walk with me over the  hills , and everywhere.
I've been torn apart all from the inside,
Been accused, been abused, been criticized.
I've been hurt a lot but carried my battle scars.
I've been weak but I've been strong too.
And only my past ,can ever tell the truth of my path.
I only wanted to be happy and do what is right,
To love and serve God and share my life.
Just a day after my Birth day,
My cool me, I lost it all
When someone trying to tell me
in last minute, when I am about
to stand near the pulpit.
How brave that someone to try to correct me
In a wrong place and a wrong time.
Just the devil making trouble
To cause division among God's people.
By the way because I love to smile,
it don't mean there is no pain behind.
Because I cry, lowly and meek,
It do not mean I am weak,
It is from my tears I gain strength .
Because I share some of my troubles,
It don't mean I lost my way like bubbles.
No way, don't try to think that way.
I've used my might in so many journeys of life.
I am a survival of ranging storms...
But I took it as a blessings not a doom;
Because My Friend, My Savior, My Jesus,
Went through a lot worse than my life.
Do not quick to judge me,
Step carefully in order to go forward
successfully with me.
Because now and then, I am silence, and speechless,
it don't mean I have nothing to say from my chest.
I'm just holding back my tongue for better time.
I despite insulting type  person,
If you want my respect, show it to me.
I'm a person who never forget
and I love to return kindness.
I stand with the golden rule:
"Do Unto others as you would want
Others do unto you."
Remember one word is enough
for a wise man and woman.
Learn to inspire someone.
Let the Lord heal your jealousy,
Malice, Envy, and Superiority .
"Don't be stumbling block with your brethren"
Not to choke them by your negative unsolicited criticism.
If I never ask for it, never give it.
I hope this poem is loud  and clear.

Author Ms. Ging
March 27,2013
Just wanted to clear my pish thought  and get it off from my chest
Now I'm feeling better after I've express this, through poem. :)
Thank you for reading.:)
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Submitted by ging_a on October 02, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:22 min read

Quick analysis:

Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,260
Words 459
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 56, 5

Ging Alburo D.

Hi Everyone! This is Ging not so tall and not so short. I came from a big family of Ten and I am the last fruit of my parents love on the first set of seven siblings. My family describe me as friendly, lively, lovely and poetic and funny; this is when I was at home in my native land and speak my own language and dialect. I speak two languages, three dialects and two dialect that I can understand but I can't speak very well. another extras,I can read Spanish but can't understand all the words, I speak few sentence. I love most of the sports and I was involved in sports during my younger years. I have passion in music and acting during my High school and college years. Graduated From O.T.C In B.S.E.ED. I started my Master but did not continue it...Its to be continued...:)I love to sing and play instruments like: guitar, piano, Auto Harp,ukelele, banjo and trying an accordion. I love life, I love to smile and laugh. I love to imagine and to dreams. I like to keep busy not sitting and doing nothing. I love vegetarian food and fruits and water to drink. I love people and I am people person. Honesty is the best policy for me. I like to be around trust worthy, Spiritual and God fearing people.I believe in simplicity is beauty,Simple but terrible ...:) I am curious person...I dislike critical, hateful person. CRITICISM without love brings destruction and LOVE without criticism brings stagnation. You have to learn to balance it. I like poetry because its an expression of our inner soul. Words that sweetly and wisely spoken are precious than silver or gold. I was told by the people when I was little, I am poet, and My Sweet told me, I have potential to be good poet if I will develop it. When I was invited to join this site, I was excited. I was motivated by the promise gift.Hehehehe When I was in high school around 10 t0 14 years old, I did not much pay attention about it, We were required to submit at least Five to Ten poems to be written in our native language; I was in panic because I waited at the last minute;So I have to ask my Sweet Aunt to help me and come up with more poems, because I had only done a four pieces.:) She was pity with me, so she agreed. In one day.., we're able to come up with the minimum requirements. Yikes! it was a close call!:) I was so pleased that the teacher was very please of the writings and my choice of words. Hehehe and she love it.:) Thanks to the founder of this poetry site, that encourage everyone to share what's in their heart and of course with the rules to follow, and review each other and help one another encourage each other. I am kind of addicted to poetry, I could not sleep when words are floating waiting to be capture. I have to get up and write it, and follow up the next day.By the way, I am sharing the Different types of Poetry, to remind you and myself of the different type so that we will have a better ideas what to write. And when we review others writing, we can understand and we can give a good judgement, kind and fair. Let us Respect each others work, Put your feet on others shoes, Look at the meaning beyond the saying of the poem, leave a comment in assertive way that will encourage me or someone to keep writing and sharing. Here is the following types of poetry: 1. Limerick- A short, humorous poem composed of 5 lines. It has rhyme scheme of aabba. 2. Haiku- A Japanese poem made up of 3 lines with a syllable pattern of 5-7-5 . Concrete- A poem that takes the shape of the poem's topic. 4. Couplet- A two-lined rhyming poem. 5. Diamante- A poem a 7 lines that begins with one noun and ends with that noun's opposite. 6. Free-verse- Poetry that does not contain regular patterns of rhythm or rhyme. Hurray! Just reach the Legendary level as I set to be reach exactly midnight of May 3rd 2012.:) Good morning to myself thanks to all the supporters.:) Hope you will reach yours too. and by the way, My Pin arrived today May 3;12.:)TY My heart flip flops! hehehe wink! I am on Tag site. Welcome to add me. I'm the founder of "You are not alone club get advice, in yahoo." You are invited to join in.:) Let me know.:) Thank you for reading. Take care yourself. Be happy, easy go lucky. God bless. more…

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