bad day



today seemed like just another day
untill the sun came out
and shined my way
then in a flash it was fillied with dismay
the kind that i couldnt wish away
we had made plans all week long
to go down the mountain and see my mom
but the car broke down
 its was the very frist thing
that started out to ruin my day
then I got sick as one could be
and kept on thinking how could this happen to me
but whats to be is to be
I just wish once things would work out for me
but that seems like something ill never see
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Submitted on September 02, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAAACDEFAGGGGG
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 491
Words 108
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15

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