Expressions of humble and noble confessions

emotion,strength,and will for earth

Passionate climatic pre-thought notions gave birth

to a writer that aluminates self worth

Creating an astonishing thought provoking series of questiions from dirt

so where shal we start from here on out

the first couple of lines gave critics enough to talk about

Extreme creativity dipicting life though similies

trained through trainings simplisties

Imagine peace with the lack of greed.......Perfections intolerable situation

Costly cautionary circumstances thats the jist

ignorance it's time to feed

Tearing flesh from bone begining at the wirst with devios minds it's hard

to see why they even exist

where are the common consistences of humane thoughts

because we say what they have no tongue for....

Recreating thought immutable in every facid (spitefull bastards)

fickled are the mouth that wish to speeak more

looking to the masters of word play with repentence to pay

being the common faults of mortal men

Niether noble or humbled hens

for this we take up arms

ignorance among animals is savageness

found on farms....

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Submitted on May 11, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme A B B B C D D A A X C X X X X E X E X X X F A F
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,090
Words 177
Stanzas 24
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

Deathofthepoet Neal

From jamestown NY and love the art of poetry and wish to become a published book author, and other then that I'm a father of four and try to live in the right path of this little thing called life. more…

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