Are We Officially Over ?



Are we officially over now and nothing can get us back,
Our family and friends almost tried everything to get us back
But nothing really worked out yet so we are both along now.

We went to the bar where we met after drinking a few shots,
And laughing out loud as if we knew each other before shots
Made us falling in love and taking the jacket of saddens away.

Now we are back siting in the same chairs drinking our tears
Instead and crying so quietly so none of us hear our aches,
Trying to create a map of our tears to get us back in love again.

Still remember your message that you throw it to me with your
Number so I replied to you with a text saying let's wait until thur
So we waited for a few minutes to turn at twelve to Thursday.

How funny that you did the think the same with a woman who
She sit near by me and you throw to her the same message who
Got your old phone number which was the same one when I heard you missing me.

I recall the moment when you attacked me in a dark corner,
Where I shamelessly kissed you without knowing your
Name yet but I swear to God that you were a great kisser.

Tears on my chain to see you siting there by your self
And crying of smelling the scent that find it by yourself
Now you are imaging it again with tears in your closing eyes.

I'm still wondering if he does remember our first dance on the floor,
We both danced in a world who wouldn't allowed a heart breaker fear
On every women who really does love her man until he dies.

Stop making me feel you sad of seeing you asking other women
To dance with you and they all refused because you are not the man
Whom I still have the same space I kept for your warm heart.

31/3/2014
Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Submitted on April 02, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:42 min read
1

Quick analysis:

Scheme AAX BBC XXX DEC FFX EDE GGH DXH XXX
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,650
Words 338
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3

Ahmad Al_khatat

I started writing poems since I was ten years old, Most of my poems are free verse or proses.Which talked about sad dark and wild romance .Even some ones talking politics.http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose_poetryhttp://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Free_verse ahmad4all_2@hotmail.comMontreal - Canada Thank you more…

All Ahmad Al_khatat poems | Ahmad Al_khatat Books

0 fans

Discuss the poem Are We Officially Over ? with the community...

0 Comments

    Translation

    Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

    Select another language:

    • - Select -
    • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
    • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
    • Español (Spanish)
    • Esperanto (Esperanto)
    • 日本語 (Japanese)
    • Português (Portuguese)
    • Deutsch (German)
    • العربية (Arabic)
    • Français (French)
    • Русский (Russian)
    • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
    • 한국어 (Korean)
    • עברית (Hebrew)
    • Gaeilge (Irish)
    • Українська (Ukrainian)
    • اردو (Urdu)
    • Magyar (Hungarian)
    • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
    • Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Italiano (Italian)
    • தமிழ் (Tamil)
    • Türkçe (Turkish)
    • తెలుగు (Telugu)
    • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
    • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
    • Čeština (Czech)
    • Polski (Polish)
    • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Românește (Romanian)
    • Nederlands (Dutch)
    • Ελληνικά (Greek)
    • Latinum (Latin)
    • Svenska (Swedish)
    • Dansk (Danish)
    • Suomi (Finnish)
    • فارسی (Persian)
    • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
    • հայերեն (Armenian)
    • Norsk (Norwegian)
    • English (English)

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Are We Officially Over ?" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 28 Mar. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/66040/are-we-officially-over-?>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    March 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    3
    days
    14
    hours
    32
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    What animal did Robert Burns call "Wee, sleekit, cowrin, tim’rous beastie"?
    A Mole
    B Mouse
    C Sparrow
    D Spider