Another Eden - Sonnet



Not in that embalmed garden long ago,
Where from an interdicted rod Eve took
And gave mankind to eat, with that fresh look
And mien no longer maidenly that said 'I know
I am a child no more; nor will you be
When you have tasted this; come to my bed,
Come on, try it, don't be shy' - but left unsaid
That his 'Yes' would seal our skaith and our mortality.
No, not there, not you and me, not now nor never!
Another, balmier, Eden calls us in
To taste her rich-hung pomegranates free from sin,
To give and take and eat with Him together;
Then laugh and sing and live no more alone,
And make the silken pilgrimage to rest as one.
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABBACDDCEFFEGH
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 612
Words 124
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

Lindsay George Hall

British born and brought up, classically educated.Apart from the Greek and Latin Classics, my special enthusiasms are English and German romantic poetry, but also (outwith that loop) the spare New Englander Emily Dickinson and Gerard Manley Hopkins. My own stuff here is largely 'retro', but I make no apology for that. Poetry, to be poetry, needs discipline.I am happy to review (or preview) poems by request (lindsayxix@gmail.com). more…

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