And You,In My Dazed State



what jaded thrills await the jaded hearts that seek them,
what timeless webs they weave,
what broken hearted musings could contain them...

if i tend to look amazed,
there's a soft and mortal reason for it,
there's a second hand feeling,
it still jolts my body awake at night,
it still causes blue rain to soak my clothes...

time comes and goes,
you dont feel like being nice,
dont feel like being sweet...

made my own legend,
forget that im 34,
give your face before you
try to blow my mind...

in my prime,i was really something to look at,
you always look for something to see,
show me you're real...

no need for tears tonight,
no stress in my neck,
just smiles all around...

dark eyed girl,
what else do you do?
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Submitted on July 01, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXA XXXBX XXX XXCX XXX BXX XC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 691
Words 134
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 5, 3, 4, 3, 3, 2

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