A Women's Desire



A Women's Desire

I love you, you said.
I love you too, I replied
Then the words died.
Too tired, too used,
Too insignificantly light,
They fused...
 And disappeared into night.

If only I'd been a little more demanding,
A little more commanding,
Then perhaps you'd have asked me,
"How can I love thee?" instead.

For I desperately wished
For your lingering kiss
That would uplift my soul
In the depths of the night,
As the wind in the folds of a kite.

I hungered for your breath on my neck
As soft, as light, as a butterfly's flight
Mixed with caresses so bold,
They enveloped my whole
within the sweetest delights.

But most of all that night,
I longed for words
That would tell me
Not only you loved me,
But heard me and saw me.
Words thickened with desire
that said...
Your smell entices me,
Your body excites me
The way it fits into mine
So blissfully divine
There exists no place, no time.

Oh, if only I'd been
A little more demanding,
A little more commanding,
I'd have turned to you and bluntly said,
"Ask me how...
How you can love me, instead?"
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Submitted on March 09, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme a bccdede fFgb xxhee xexhx exgggabggiix xfFbxb
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,011
Words 198
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 7, 4, 5, 5, 12, 6

Naomi Buote

Hi, I'm an ESL teacher, but hey, I don't matter....IT's the words. I love that you all like writing and look forward to reading your work and being inspired. I feel I'm not alone at this. I write a lot for my students to get them to write back. Here in Quebec, in French schools literature seems to get forgotten especially at primary and secondary levels...well who has time between all those French rules you have to teach! So in the ESL classroom, I try and introduce as much literature as I can. I try to get students to enjoy it. Then, I show them how it helps them to see the gray and a way past the end of their noses. A word by itself is a wonderful thing, as worthy to the fiddle one string but adorned with a sentence a word blossoms in sense inviting young hearts to sing... (check out more in poem Teaching more than just Words) more…

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