A Tale from the Barrel



The Fallacies of Comradery,
every comrad fixates his eyes above
We crabs in a barrel,
Our objective is freedom and
for it we'll dismiss love

Fervently sprinting to a would-be melting pot,
eagerly mistaking it for the top
Striving for a climax,
Embracing the fall,
If we could outlive the shock

Physically indistinguishable,
Possessing similar briefs for the same mission
Comrads become competitors,
Gladiators in a vain competition

Encouragement would fuel the Escape,
We'd rather slumber as our brother pulls our weight
We crabs in a barrel,
Our mission is avoiding fate.
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Submitted on March 17, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme xaBxa xxxxx bcxc xdBd
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 555
Words 92
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 4, 4

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