A Struggle Lost
The rain comes pouring down
And it never seems to stop
I swim to try to get out of it
But can’t seem to make it to the top
I fight against the hands
Which are pushing me back down
I struggle as I lose my breath
I cannot hear a sound
The effort that I have left in me
Is getting less and less
I’m going to give in to it
As I just need to rest
My fists unclench, the struggle now gone
The color fades from my face
My soul no longer with my body
It’s now gone without a trace
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Submitted on May 02, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 463 |
Words | 104 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 16 |
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